Monday, May 1, 2017

Coloring Inside the Lines: The Importance of Understanding the Rules Before You Break Them



So no doubt, if you are a regular reader of my blog, you understand my affinity for Captain America. I have mostly looked at Steve Rogers’ Cap, but really it is the character itself in all its incarnations. I have enjoyed Sam Wilson’s time as Cap. This is why I think it is important to address a topic related to the recent controversy from a different angle, mostly because of writer, Nick Spencer’s reaction to all of the backlash.

On April 21st, Spencer posted a series of tweets aimed at quelling the controversy by defending his right to do what he would like as a creator.


The first part of Spencer’s argument I partially addressed in my earlier blog on the matter: Why Captain America's Origins Matter. To some extent, he’s right. The stories we tell right now are important. We need stories to help guide the way. The job of the artist is to hold the mirror up to nature and ask the tough questions. He’s right. The job of the storyteller is to challenge and test us. We are a nation divided, and we shouldn’t shy away from telling that story. However, to counter his argument, our distaste for this story arc isn’t about escapism; it’s about giving hope to the resistance. This feels like a punch in the gut, especially when we have two Captain Americas and only one is on our side. I think he feels like he is making some profound statement about the undercurrent of racism and fascism that hid in dark corners until the Trump era. The truth is that it wasn’t really that hidden if you really opened your eyes. Trump didn’t make America more racist or more fascist. He helped make it seem more socially acceptable so people are being more aggressive about it, but it was always there and always visible. There were many who lived in a bubble who felt that these issues were gone, but I think it was more of a case of willful ignorance rather than it being too hidden from the average person.

However, I want to focus on the second part of his argument.


He seems to be arguing that by asking him to stay true to the symbolic nature of the character that we, as the audience, are putting the character into a glass case. I would argue that this is not what we are asking at all. When Ed Brubaker took over as writer for Captain America, we did get a darker feel to Steve Rogers. This Cap didn’t always have all of the right answers, and he did struggle with his decisions to do the right thing. It wasn’t the Cap of old that just always knew what the right thing to do was. When he found out that the Winter Soldier was, in fact, his best friend, Bucky Barnes, he struggled with what he should do about the situation. Looking at the older Cap comics, this might have been less of a struggle for him as Winter Soldier was a threat in a different version. However, Brubaker gave us a more human Captain America, one who struggled with emotional entanglements and sometimes reacted out of pure emotion rather than a rational sense of right and wrong.

Spencer continues to talk about the character determining the symbol and not vice versa. This is an oversimplification. Symbols and characters actually have a symbiotic relationship as they develop. At first, it is true the symbol comes from the character. However, as time goes on, it is actually the symbolic nature of the character that can drive certain character decisions. This is especially true when working in a series of works. If you have established early on in the narrative, say in book one of a series, the symbolic nature of the character, then to deviate from those characteristics in book five, would be an error in narrative structure. It would be tantamount to breaking the “Chekhov rule” by placing a gun on the table in the scene and then never using it. 

This argument also negates the influence of the audience on the work. Spencer seems to subscribe to the fallacy of authorial intent. This particular fallacy sees the author as “God” and suggests that the author’s intent in constructing a narrative’s meaning is superior to all other interpretations of the work. He doesn’t seem to recognize the ability of the audience to reject the point that he is trying to make because it is incompatible with their own expectations and understanding of the works. He wraps his authorial intent in the idea that it would be a disservice to the creators to not tell the best story that he could tell.

This is the final point that I want to address and really the heart of the entire issue. When learning how to write, we are first taught grammar rules. Of course, we tend to throw some of those grammar rules outside of the window when we are writing for non-academic purposes. However, as a reader, I can always tell if someone is breaking the grammar rules because they don’t know the rules to begin with or if the rule is being broken with purpose. This is the key I think to good writing. It’s fine to break the rules of grammar. Sentence fragments can be effective tools to convey emotion or the intent of the dialogue. We don’t all speak in perfect grammar, so having something like a pronoun-antecedent error (i.e. using “they” when it should be “he/she”) can be necessary to replicate realistic speech patterns. The point is that in order to make a break in the rules meaningful it needs to be clear that the writer understands the rules that he/she is breaking in the first place. Otherwise, it just comes across as lazy writing.

So how does this translate in the world of comics? Well, each character narrative has specific rules attached to it. These are often character traits that help define who the character is. When Sam Wilson as Captain America decides to side with the Black Lives Matter movement and release footage of an African-American superhero, Rage, being beaten by the police without provocation and when he was innocent of any crime, it is breaking a rule because it means something. Of course, we tend to think of Captain America always siding with the side of justice officials such as the police. However, in this case, it wasn’t the most just thing to do, so Wilson’s Cap broke this rule in order to do what is right in terms of social justice. It meant something that Wilson’s Cap decided to break with the blue line and uncover the corrupt and unjust behavior of the police force and fight for Rage’s innocence.

Let me use an analogy. When we are first being taught to color, it is emphasized that we color inside the lines of the picture. Also, we are encouraged to use realistic color schemes. However, as we age and develop an artistic sensibility, we begin to see that we are more inclined to color outside of lines with purpose. When Picasso went into his cubist phase, he didn’t just decide to take represent people using basic geometric forms. He broke the rules of realism in order to show an object from various angles. It was meant to replicate the various points of view a viewer has on an object and how looking at an object from a different angle or perspective shapes our understanding of the object.
In this case, there doesn’t seem to be any clearly articulated reason behind breaking the rules that govern the Marvel world of Steve Rogers other than it’s the story that Nick Spencer wanted to tell. He didn’t feel like telling an interesting story within the confines of the established parameters so instead decided to go outside of them. This can be powerful if done correctly, but right now, it just appears to be laziness on his part. It is much more difficult to write within the rules than to discard them completely.

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